The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
Both given maps illustrate the way of the accessing for a number of roads to town hospital in two years 2007 and 2010
In general, it can be seen that, in 2010 roundabout added to new structure of city hospital. in addition, bus stop replaced by bus station, and staff car park in the right and in the left of hospital road respectively.
To begin with first map, it can be observed that, the city hospital was surrounded by ring road . Moreover, the bus stop located in the right and left of hospital rad. Whilst, car part staff and public car park was situated in the right of hospital road near bus stop. Finally, city road was located in the south of city infirmary and crossed hospital road.
Turning to second map, it can be witnessed that, few infrastructures added to city hospital, in the southern side of ring road was supplied by a roundabout connecting hospital road with ring road. The staff car park remained in the right side of hospital. While the public car park moved to the right edge of ring road. Furthermore, a new bus station added in the right side of hospital road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...town hospital in two years 2007 and 2010 In general, it can be seen that, in 2010...
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...ity hospital was surrounded by ring road . Moreover, the bus stop located in the...
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... was surrounded by ring road . Moreover, the bus stop located in the right and le...
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...remained in the right side of hospital. While the public car park moved to the right ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, moreover, second, so, while, in addition, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5303030303 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48567522998 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429292929293 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5980619791 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333756476286 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146738508808 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110501124827 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243814689976 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10265011745 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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