Some People Think It Is Acceptable To Use Animals For The Benefit Of Humans. Other People Think It Is Wrong To Exploit Animals For Human Purposes. What Is Your Opinion?
Many people believe it is bearable to utilize animals in the sake of human needs, whereas, rest of them have the notion that intolerable to operate animals for the benefits of men. In my opinion, every living organism has the right to live peaceful irrespective of whether they are humans or other living things. Draft animals were very common before the automobile industry and used as a sledge. for example ox, donkey or buffalo.
Firstly, these animals are commonly consumed as a source of protein diet in every region of the world in the form of red meat. For example beef, pork and chicken. Which give rise the business to slaughterhouses and demands more and more. The increase in demands creates pressure on slaughtering and results in early-stage maturity in these mammals by means of injections and other drugs. Ultimately make those animals susceptible to infections and harms the species. For example, Dudo ducks were popular in Mauritius island in the 19th century but the consumption as food by turkey shipping traveller made them extinct from the globe.
Secondly, medicinal purpose as a guinea pig to save humans should be banned. Experimental procedure risk the life of them or may results in mutation for the future generations to come. Furthermore, the use of animals as a sledge force the early death of these creatures. This practice is still common in rural areas where riders beat them with cruelty and decrease their life potency.
In conclusion, everyone in this world shares a common nature and the rights of living must be equal for all. Because humans are considered most evolved species does not make sense that mankind can utilize animals for the profits. Strict rules and regulations should be made to stop torture on other creatures of the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...tomobile industry and used as a sledge. for example ox, donkey or buffalo. First...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9966442953 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57923619482 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3372429781 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5882352941 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253705262093 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710217167938 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583063254014 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148554172926 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718206535451 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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