Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-bringsproblem as well as benefits.Do you think being celebrity brings more benefits ormore problems?

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Nowadays,people intend to participate in entertainment ...
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...e intend to participate in entertainment because of the fact that it brings them...
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...intend to participate in entertainment because of the fact that it brings them many glamorous things.In...
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...at it brings them many glamorous things.In my opinion,being a celebrity is greatly...
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...them many glamorous things.In my opinion,being a celebrity is greatly about fame and ...
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...ly about fame and fortune but it still have problems As far as I know,being a cele...
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...it still have problems As far as I know,being a celebrity is purely attractive for pe...
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...the world and then they have a big fan.Let me imagine about the future if I were a...
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... the future if I were a famous film star,I will receive suggestion from actor and...
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...ortunities of joining in foreign films.Besides that,they will be paid attention and he...
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...ortunities of joining in foreign films.Besides that,they will be paid attention and he...
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...f joining in foreign films.Besides that,they will be paid attention and helped more ...
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...rom fans thus everything is developing.For instance,Justin Bieber is known as a fa...
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...s everything is developing.For instance,Justin Bieber is known as a famous singer att...
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...eceives sentimental and gift from fans.Moreover,being a celebrity will generate a large...
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...sentimental and gift from fans.Moreover,being a celebrity will generate a large of mo...
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...elebrity will generate a large of money.In these event,manager ready to pay a lot...
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...brity will generate a large of money.In these event,manager ready to pay a lot of money for...
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...enerate a large of money.In these event,manager ready to pay a lot of money for singer ...
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...singer in order to attract to audience.For example,If you are a worker in office,y...
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...rder to attract to audience.For example,If you are a worker in office,you will be ...
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...or example,If you are a worker in office,you will be paid 50VNĐ per hour,by contras...
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... office,you will be paid 50VNĐ per hour,by contrast,singer will be paid 20 times m...
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...will be paid 50VNĐ per hour,by contrast,singer will be paid 20 times more than them.As...
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...er will be paid 20 times more than them.As you can see,being a celebrity brings p...
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...d 20 times more than them.As you can see,being a celebrity brings people advantages ...
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...ngs people advantages In the other hand,besides benefits which comes from occupation,th...
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...des benefits which comes from occupation,there are many problems about this job as we...
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...e many problems about this job as well.Due to attention densely,they always focus ...
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...his job as well.Due to attention densely,they always focus on appearance and even no...
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...en not showing their feeling for public.For instance,before going out,celebrities ...
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...ng their feeling for public.For instance,before going out,celebrities have to make up ...
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...for public.For instance,before going out,celebrities have to make up so as to people do not...
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... going out,celebrities have to make up so as to people do not recognize them.Another pr...
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...p so as to people do not recognize them.Another problem result in this job is pressure...
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...b is pressure when you have an anti fan.Another example proved about this job:a singer...
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...epression cause in fans. In conclusion,being a celebrity has pros and cons simultane...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47719298246 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51217378949 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628070175439 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 142.0 20.2975951904 700% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 748.5 49.4020404114 1515% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 780.5 106.682146367 732% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 142.5 20.7667163134 686% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 65.5 7.06120827912 928% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21994474031 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135396741996 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818125161503 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592283903398 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048106490402 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 75.6 13.0946893788 577% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -81.11 50.2224549098 -162% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 59.8 11.3001002004 529% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.69 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.06 8.58950901804 175% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 58.8 10.1190380762 581% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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