On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortnunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter- Describe the item you lost- explain how you lost it- tell the

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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortnunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- explain how you lost it
- tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

Dear Mr. Chadha,

I am writing this letter to apprise you that I am one of your premium customer and took travel insurance from your company before departure. Unfortunately, I have lost my laptop during my recent visit to Singapore and need your help with the claim settlement.

As I understand, all my valuable items were covered for any damage or loss during my journey. This is latest HP Laptop that I purchased last month and have copy of invoice to give you as reference proof. Most probably, I forgot this at the famous United cafe near the airport after my meeting with potential customer. I was getting late for my flight and may be forgot to pickup laptop bag in hurry.

Please note I have contacted the cafe and they have confirmed that their ground staff has not received any laptop bag. I would request you to please start the tracking process at the earliest. Also, as per the process if Laptop is not found in 10 days then claim needs to be processed.

I look forward for your favorable response and immediate action from your side as my business is getting hampered due to this loss.

Yours faithfully,
chomu kumar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Chadha, I am writing this letter to apprise you ...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the latest'.
Suggestion: is the latest
... damage or loss during my journey. This is latest HP Laptop that I purchased last month a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'copied'.
Suggestion: copied
...op that I purchased last month and have copy of invoice to give you as reference pro...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70792079208 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43278932012 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638613861386 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5439308937 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206984288034 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685859132677 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592267002587 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11744493957 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900815416396 0.0580467560999 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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