You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
Dear Mary,
Hi,sorry I have not get in touch with you for a while now. I'm just been ashamed to write to and let you know that the book I borrowed got damaged mistakenly.
To say the fact,am really embarrassed about the damaging the book ,because I know how special and important the book is to you and that you received it as a gift from your late father.
it actually happened last month when I was reading the chapter three of the book,you know how interesting the book is. Because of my carelessness,I mistakenly spilled coffee all over the page.
However, I felt very embarrassed to explain you about this issue but I have already asked a friend of mine working in a friend of mine working in a newspaper printing shop how this would be repair and he told me to send it over and promised it will be ready by this weekend.
Once again,am so sorry this had to happen, please forgive me.
Yours sincerely,
Hannah.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mary, Hi,sorry I have not get in touch with yo...
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Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sorry
Dear Mary, Hi,sorry I have not get in touch with you for a ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
..., Hi,sorry I have not get in touch with you for a while now. Im j...
^^^
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... get in touch with you for a while now. Im just been ashamed to write to and let y...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ook I borrowed got damaged mistakenly. To say the fact,am really embarrassed ab...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , am
...takenly. To say the fact,am really embarrassed about the damaging t...
^^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... embarrassed about the damaging the book ,because I know how special and important...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed it as a gift from your late father. it actually happened last month when I w...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...as a gift from your late father. it actually happened last month when I was...
^^
Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...as reading the chapter three of the book,you know how interesting the book is. Becau...
^^^^
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... the book is. Because of my carelessness,I mistakenly spilled coffee all over the ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enly spilled coffee all over the page. However, I felt very embarrassed to expl...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sed it will be ready by this weekend. Once again,am so sorry this had to happe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , am
...by this weekend. Once again,am so sorry this had to happen, please for...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46153846154 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46845580172 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0810367098 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306448055679 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109783921169 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076885783342 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135560521739 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873910297915 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.