The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The shown chart illustrates the percentage of people who had been living in their own houses or in ranted ones between 1918 and 2011. Overall, in the first years it is obvious that the rate of households in owned accommodation is lower that the rate of the second categry, but this fact changed in 1971 when they were the same. After this year the higher category decreased and the other incresead dramatically.
The most strikinf detail is the fact that in 1918 the percentage of individuals who afforded to own a house was just 20% while the number of who rented their home was almost 80%. it it clear that during the years something in the economy of England and Wales changed, because over the time both presented categories rose and decreased in order to be equal in 1971 with the percentage of 50%. However, in the last presented year the one which was higher had a downwand of around 40% while the number of people who could own their property raised to 60%.
In conclusion, as it can be seen in the image, in the modern society it became easier to own you house than in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...f who rented their home was almost 80%. it it clear that during the years somethin...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...f who rented their home was almost 80%. it it clear that during the years something i...
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Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...rented their home was almost 80%. it it clear that during the years something in the ...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...almost 80%. it it clear that during the years something in the economy of England and...
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Line 2, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wnwand of around 40% while the number of people who could own their property rais...
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Line 2, column 555, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...could own their property raised to 60%. In conclusion, as it can be seen in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47738693467 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38229117228 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562814070352 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6574955893 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232309596218 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918393682985 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782266925645 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130827827617 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729181512677 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.