People naturally resist making changes in their lives.
What kinds of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
People normally have a tendency to avoid changes in their lifestyles. The main problem this cause is disrupting their own self-development and the most viable solution to this problem is counselling campaigns advising the reliability of their actions.
The principal problem associated with sticking with a monotonous lifestyle is that an individual is disallowing oneself for own betterment. This means that people like to stay in their comfort zone where they are not exploiting themselves to an opportunity due to assuming the associated risk factors. This often results in hindering their growth for a better future. For instance, many people avoid shifting to modern ways of doing business these days and instead stay with their traditional method which is affecting their turnover due to outdated business strategies.
To tackle this problem the government should launch counseling centers to make people discuss their problem with experts and getting appropriate solutions for their problem. Many people are afraid of taking risk thinking of unfavorable consequences which may affect them negatively and ultimately holds them to take a decision. A consultation campaign could shed some light on this difficult situation and guide people even if their desired actions are not suitable as per the scenario. For example, a similar initiative in India helps various old businesses to begin selling their products on various online platforms which effectively helped them in increasing their sale drastically.
In conclusion, staying with an old fashioned lifestyle is a major issue which can results in affecting people growth negatively and holds them to let go multiple opportunities, however, it can be addressed through advising people through counseling classes showing the accuracy of their decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...ed lifestyle is a major issue which can results in affecting people growth negatively a...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...howing the accuracy of their decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6231884058 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9268186809 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.55842067 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246200109609 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999147247042 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661850859566 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162898516712 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05304034049 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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