You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on
- which places they should visit
- where should they live
- Invite them to do something with you
Dear Mick,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. I received your letter last week and was happy to learn that your parents will be visiting Alwar next month for a short trip. It will be my pleasure to offer guidance and advice to make their trip memorable.
As you are aware that Alwar was a princely state before its merger with the Union of India and has a rich cultural diversity. There are many forts which allure tourists globally but I would suggest to visit the most prominent ones "The Bala Qila" and the "The Moosi Maharani ki Chatri" apart from this "The City Museum" also houses art and cultural artefacts of its Mughal and Rajput rulers from the past. As you are also aware that Alwar is famous for its Tiger reserve so it is also a must go additionally I would suggest visiting the Silserh Lake which is on the outskirts of the city, the Silserh restaurant at the hilltop presents a panoramic view of the lake.
To make their visit more comfortable I would suggest hotels like The Lemon Tree, The Rajasthan Tourism Hotel which offers all modern amenities and is located in the centre of the city. On the weekend I can take them to the local markets where they can do some shopping as well as taste some local cuisine.
I look forward to your response and seeing them soon.
Best wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest visiting'.
Suggestion: suggest visiting
...ch allure tourists globally but I would suggest to visit the most prominent ones 'The Bala ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58943089431 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3054371929 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630081300813 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.526558817 44.8134815571 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 102.636363636 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213349568257 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690009980478 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620308032571 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118717191319 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318900171708 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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