The diagram below shows the process of canning of fish. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.
The given picture illustrates the various steps needed to be performed in process of canning of fish.
Overall, it is clear that there are total 15 steps involved in canning of fish. The process begins from catching the fish and ends at dispatching the labeled product to supermarkets.
In the beginning, the fishes are caught, followed by freezing and storing in the next step. Before thawing, fishes are unloaded and weighed and cut Into big pieces for getting steam cooked. After cooking, Are cooled and these are filleted or cut into small pieces.
Moving further, these pieces are canned along with addition of brine, water or oil. In the next step the cans are sealed and then heated for sterilization. Then, stamping or labeling of the cans in done before storing them for final dispatch to supermarkets for sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion of brine, water or oil. In the next step the cans are sealed and then heated...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97122302158 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47601192653 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640287769784 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.935738608 43.030603864 30% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.7777777778 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 5.23603664747 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166625088868 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067500972328 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518090229782 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110544631691 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513031042969 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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