Some people prefer to play team sports, while other prefer to play individual sport. Discuss the advantages of each. Then indicate which you prefer and why?
Recently, the phenomenon of sports teams and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of sports clubs is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that competitive sports can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, individual sports can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of doing exercise, as well as swimming sport, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the benefit of sports. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both the physical exercise and the practical sport apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, the sports centre might increase the consequences of sport's fields. Moreover, fundamental aspects of dangerous sports could relate to this reality that demerits of the physical injury pertain to the sports pain. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of the football team is correlated negatively with playing the sport. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of daily exercise.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the sports activity far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of winter sport prove the significance of the strong team, but also pinpoint individual practice implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...oundly believe that the benefits of the sports activity far outweigh its drawbacks. No...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45945945946 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06268396906 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644787644788 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9595837381 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170594901408 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577329573898 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373738913624 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996498117466 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240511100162 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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