The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging .Do you agree or disagree?
All kind of advertising must have completely been prohibited because its purpose is useless and can even harmful. In my opinion ,I totally disagree with that point.
There are various reasons why I believe that advertising brings a wide range of benefits to communities and can not be banned .The first reason I disagree with banning advertising because this industry creates a range of job opportunities .So if advertising was prohibited, the number of unemployed workers would increase significantly ,due to have a negative effect on economics and society .Another problem if industrial advertisement was made illegal is that governments could face to lose a huge amount of tax revenue .Every years, this term make dramatically contributions money to governments .So even this problem happened, society and economy would face with serious consequences.
Advertising is not only brings goods to nearly with customers but also provide for them with information about the products and they can make better shopping choices . My mother, for example, always watch the advertisement and search more information related to that goods so she can understand more how its quality .And beside that ,people's knowledge about various aspects of life can be enriched by advertising .For instance, my brother rather ask adults the information, he watches educational advertised programmes in order to expand his knowledge.
In conclusion ,advertising industry brings too much benefits for people to ban. I strongly believe that if government prohibited this industry ,their society and economy would suffer a great deal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46184738956 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00049062655 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642570281124 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.578642974 49.4020404114 432% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.285714286 106.682146367 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5714285714 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236156354431 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104750180843 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545733996485 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146055114189 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399993771629 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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