You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.
Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to convey gesture with regards to food and service, when me and my friends were the guest at you restaurant on last Saturday.
Let me explain in more detail. I am the regular visitor of your restaurant and due to courteous service and homely food preparation, I decided to celebrate my birthday in your speciality roof top restaurant. I would really like to thank you from hostess to staff and all the staff members for making this day memorable.
As it was weekend and I walk in to your place without prior reservation. When I check with reception person for table of 6,he said we have to wait for an hour time,as the restaurant was full. But he recognized me as a regular guest and he offered me the table within few minutes. The hostess welcomed us with cheerful smile and food and service was out of the box, with the performance of my favourite live band.
I would like to suggest you to start live counter of snacks and also more food items in vegetarian starters.
Thankyou once again and will recommend your restaurant to many of them.
Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63861386139 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54122465801 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608910891089 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9281145358 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1818181818 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2951309701 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946075625708 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632267188532 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146458575564 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407928744845 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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