In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
it is irrefutable to say that, not only the developed countries but also developing countries are building very large shopping plazas in their cities and arban areas. Some people believe that big shopping plazzas are better, while others opine that small local shops should be there in the cities instead of high rise buildings and plazas. I am inclined towards building shopping malls in the cities.
Firstly, shopping plazas are more convenient and easy for the people living in the cities and towns because, all different brands and categories, to shop, you can find at a single place. In addition multi story plaza can adjust more number of shops at a single place. For example, In Dubai, if you will enter into a shopping center you can buy each and every thing of your choice at a single place. large shopping plazas can be a better replacement of small local shops.
Furthermore, local shops are difficult to maintain due to individual ownership of the shop. On the other hand, a shopping mall is taken care by a single authority or a company which maintains it properly. For example, the whole plaza will be cleaned by the building staff. local shops are difficult to trace and each shop owner is responsible for his shop.
To recapitulate the foregoing discussion, All the cities should have big shopping plazas as a replacement of small local shops. In my opinion, shopping mall is a good way to replace the markets and local centers in cities and towns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83399209486 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50817221065 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.494283328 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0769230769 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43717236814 0.242375264174 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182940264257 0.0925447433944 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886525746664 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282073356777 0.151781067708 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216478772195 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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