Nowadays, people waste a lot of food that was brought from shop and restaurant. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they through?
Presently, it is undoubtedly believe that dumping amount of food ratio have been increased by individuals, which are brought from either shops or restaurants. As per my perception, people are wasting food not only because they have numerous choices but also the environmental change are also affect this phenomenon. Although, there are some solutions which are grateful to solve it.
On the one hand, people have plenty of choices regarding consuming various type of food items, especially for tasting new meals. For an example, weddings in India, where is served variety of new food items, that is the reason , citizens who have too many choices. They take all types of meal, but do not finish it. Than, the food would be dumped into the dustbin. Furthermore, earth's atmosphere is not stable right now. Therefore, the food contamination problem was risen rapidly such as bakery items as bun, bread, which is uneatable after (2 or 3 days). Reason behind is that the climate change in atmosphere. However, there are some solutions, which are beneficial for reducing it.
Yet, on the other hand, firstly, government should educate people from upcoming disaster such as food scarcity. People who should participate in campaigns or hoardings run by government. Secondly, individuals should do proper utilization of waste food by giving it to needy people. Thereby, hunger can be satisfied. Finally, food can be given to stray animals because it is also our family member. Apart from this, giving meals to stray animals is also one type of auspicious work.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned provides plausible solutions in favour of problems. Although, not only government should aware about this phenomenon but people should also take part to solve tha wastage of food. Because, if this phenomena will be continued , than the outcome would be uncertain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21404682274 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75351755394 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4532577419 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.95 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.95 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325268348975 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842635809609 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623541931185 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190362549867 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547983091577 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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