The best way for a society to prepare its young people for
leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by
instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Today's young people will be the future of the nation, they will be leader, politician,government officer, industrial manager banking officer or many differnt other positions. Producing the capable and skilled manpower and promoting the development of the country, the society has great role. Although some numerous people –societal luminaries have been emerged in different field through great competition, it in general does not work for the majority of population, so the cooperation is the best way to prepare young generation for future.
First of all, cooperation, by its meaning people feels the positive vibes and helpful to make the friendship between the people. A nation or a society—consist of the many differnet aspect, not a single renowned profession can make a perfect—have people from the many field, they have own their talent and skill, can only show in calmed condition. Cooperation lead to enhance the mental creativity and innovate idea. For example, students, while giving the complex problem solving issue in classroom, they as a whole in the group prepare more efficient and creative skill in cooperative environment in a group rather than competative environment.
In addition the child which is grown in the cooperative environment can only be capable for the problem solving skill. For example, many present leader and politician of the Nepal have been arised from such environment. Kp Oli, prime minister of Nepal, having just school education is rised in peaceful and cooperative environmnet able to solve the present issue of nepal
Some may argue that only true intelligent will arise through hard competion process. It will be unfair to say that competition does not produce the expert candidate in the field. The society, however, is the group of people having different capacity and only some countable individual have such talents; many of them will be stressed and cannot cope the pressuse of competative environment. Ultimately they will be frustrated while unsuccess lead to some other negative consequences. For example, in Nepal, the young people after the high school education in science, are very eager to be a doctor in future. Most of them take the entrance exam, Unfortunately, however there is very little vacant space and the myriad number of application caused the exam one of the toughest competitatory process. Of course, candidate who is success in that exam definately a good candidate. Although the great majority of the candidate who are not able to select in the merit list is frustrated and tirggerd into some bad consequences, as many of them have been addicted in drug and also suffered from mental depression.
So in conclusion, cooperation is the mutual benefitary process, in which every aspect of society is involved and get positive energy and thus is the best way to prepare current youths for future professions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , government
... nation, they will be leader, politician,government officer, industrial manager banking off...
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Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ning people feels the positive vibes and helpful to make the friendship between t...
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Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...can make a perfect—have people from the many field, they have own their talent and skill, ...
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Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...problem solving issue in classroom, they as a whole in the group prepare more eff...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ther than competative environment. In addition the child which is grown in the coopera...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... the present issue of nepal Some may argue that only true intelligent will arise t...
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Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... science, are very eager to be a doctor in future. Most of them take the entrance exam, U...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2429.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25757575758 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97219566608 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517316017316 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.357784981 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.944444444 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199339040705 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588290270098 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575623958308 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119573300013 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654209958596 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.