You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/madam,
i’m writing about your food and I want to say something about it. I and my parents came to your restaurant for celebrating their anniversary.
I heard lots of good thing about your restaurant from my friend and I took a reservation from there. I said that my parents wanted to celebrate their anniversary and they wanted to special thing for it. After that we came your restaurant and your waitress took our orders and we waited about thirty minutes. I think it was too slow and it was same for everyone. this is my first complaint about you. Secondly, our food was not delicious. Because of this reason, we were disappointed. As we waited about thirty minutes, we wanted to show legendary food in front of us. However, it was available only that night. so, we want to come again. But ı have some expectations such as second chance. İt can be blemish for you. Maybe you can show honour to us. Therefore, my parents can be so happy. they should take some happiness from you and it is not too difficult problem for you.
i’m looking forward to your response. I hope you can explain something about my complaint.
Best regards.
G. Gürkan AYDEMİR
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74038461538 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58950359068 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552884615385 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3099943891 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.8947368421 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9473684211 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172833985952 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524948496751 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554559208376 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131162610168 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299371235914 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.