It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Adolescents must be able to differentiate between right and wrong at a juvenile age. I completely agree with the notion that punishment is the right method which can help them in this distinction though in my opinion punishment should be in the form of infliction of a penalty rather than beating a child. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate and provide relevant examples to support my opinion.
Since we are living in an age where the internet and television act as an alluring source of information for children. Adolescents at such age have curious minds and tend to explore and use such platforms as a source of knowledge and tend to imitate the same things which they see of television. Hence it becomes impossible to control such flow of information thus it paramount that teachers and parents play a pivotal role in imparting good habits like social injustice and morality. In certain cases some adolescents repeat the same mistake thus they should be punished. The form of punishment should have a positive effect rather than a negative effect on the children. It should include some form of penalty or a physical exercise as a punishment rather than physical or mental torture.
In a recent survey done in India, many schools have running in the ground as a form of punishment for many children who misbehave. Secondly In countries like Germany according to a recent survey done by the Reuters, it was reported that adolescents who were penalized in the form of a fine or a physical exercise avoided repeating the same mistake as compared to children who undergo mental torture.
To sum up in order for a child to learn good behaviour teachers and parents must set positive examples and punishment should be inflicted in the form of penalty or a physical exercise rather than harassment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90553745928 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77786574667 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501628664495 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3573164984 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21939198076 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799805026873 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634715535991 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135498920601 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707265627457 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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