Write a letter to your friend, your friend son is going to your country for his holiday, she wants him to stay in your home. But you cant accommodate him.
Write a letter for your friend;
-Apology for your friend
-Explain why he cant stay in your home
-give her suggestion for her son arrangement during his holiday.
Dear Rane,
I am glad to hear from you after a long period and I hope everything is fine at your end. I am delighted to know that your son Rax is visiting my country for vacation as nowadays many youths are attracted towards adventurous trips. However, I am sorry that he can’t stay at my place at this time.
You probably do not know that, I stay at north-east part of my country, which is badly affected by snow storm last week and it is freezing cold as well. Hence, as instructed by local authorities we have been evacuated to higher grounds, where the weather is under control. We have been restricted not to go back to our native until it is safe there. Anyhow, Rax will be visiting south-east part of India on holiday, which is safe and joyful at the moment.
I would like to inform you that, I have many friends in south where he can be accommodated at their place during his visit. I have already asked our common friend Bob about the stay and he is more than happy to help you out. I have given you contact address so that he can reach you in a day or two.
Please let me know if anything else I can do, with respect to the his holiday trip, and I deeply regret for the deviation in your plan caused by bad weather
Yours lovingly,
Hari
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... he is more than happy to help you out. I have given you contact address so that ...
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Line 10, column 63, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...anything else I can do, with respect to the his holiday trip, and I deeply regret for t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, well, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30416666667 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31282280029 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629166666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.3357574876 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237606826493 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810013721632 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664518667323 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125710269195 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058511791436 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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