Many countries want to host international sports events, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a subject for debate whether countries should conduct international sports events or not. Many countries are in favor of this development, while others feel that managing sports events creates many issues. This essay agrees that countries should organize international sports events along with discuss both viewpoints.
Many nations share a similar view on conducting an international sports event because this has many benefits. Among many, one prominent reason could be that success of such event can encourage people to take part in physical exercise regularly. The lucrative price given to winners will definitely leave a positive impact on youngsters and many can make a career out of sports. The noteworthy example is of Olympics. Since its inception, Olympics is a successful event, encouraging plethora of people to prepare and take part in it, this phenomenon has churned out health conscious generations. I believe that any other international event can emulate such outcome and a healthy nation is a happy nation.
Despite the advantages, some countries express a pragmatic approach and feel that a lot of issues are created while arranging such events. Managing an international sports event is time-consuming and exhausting task. The host country has to build a temporary infrastructure of highest standards. Although it is not impossible to achieve, it can easily perturbed miss the original target. For an instance, a huge scandal had emerged when Commonwealth games were done in India in 2012. Politicians attitude has outraged the citizens and they felt deceived. I think that such a program cannot be blamed for the issue because that was clearly a deliberate act by officials which can happen without organizing a sports event.
In conclusion, the essay firmly agrees with the view that international sports event should be held to produce interest in citizens for sports and exercise and problems occurring during the arrangements can be tackled smartly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: perturb
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, as to, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93846461494 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5540470829 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8235294118 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339379161037 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103293082255 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933812064339 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208057381553 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909835114696 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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