Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In Contemporary era most of students compete for taking enrollments in the universities in order to get quality education. It is suggested by some people that equal proportion of students of both genders should be enrolled by the educational institutions. I support this view that enrolling both genders equally is a positive development.
Admittedly, for many reasons, equal number of male and female must be accepted by universities in every stream. Firstly, we are living in society where there is no gender difference therefore, every University must give admissions to both sexes equally. Moreover, now people has become aware regarding role of men and women in community as women also want to take better educational services for holding lucrative professions. Thus, universities should ensure equal opportunities for both girls and boys fir reducing discrimination. Secondly, in western culture, especially, in progressed nations both genders are working because man and woman are provided with equal education and contribute in developing economic position of nation.
In addition to this, both gender are interested in different subjects therefor, if universities would provide equal opportunities to girls and boys then they become able to pursue course as per there passion as various subjects are offered by universities it would develop their interest in different fields instead of one subject. For an instance nursing attracts more women ; whereas, offering number of subjects equally to both genders will encourage them to study those subjects which are not taking by other female for getting name and fame. To elaborate it, sometimes students tend towards other courses from those which are more taken by students. Also, it is not only make career of students but also adds in development of country because country get different resources with great creativity and curiosity. However, providing different courses to both women and men will fail to bring overall development in country as they would study those subjects which is popular among them rather than trying new subjects.
To conclude, I opine that University should enroll equal number of both genders for every subject which contributes many benefits not only for students but also for overall development of nation as knowledge of everything field in need of the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42234332425 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85817382409 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553133514986 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1562296714 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.142857143 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2142857143 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226523592946 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906196249284 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780570392157 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153916800779 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264285618261 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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