You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
• advise them of your situation
• explain how this is affecting you
• request a new card
Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle in reference to inform you of the current problems I am facing due to the loss of my student identification. Let me explain further.
To elucidate I am a 2nd-year computer science student and have recently lost my identification card somewhere in the college premises subsequently, I had informed the college administration which failed to recover my card. As you are aware that this card serves as a source of identification while entering and exiting the university building additionally it is also used for issuing books from the library. Hence without it the literally suffering every day as I have to make a temporary access card while entering college which is a painful process moreover as the semester exams are approaching I am not able to issue books from the university library which is effecting my exam preparation.
Thus I would request you to issue a new card immediately so that it can help resolve the existing problems.
I look forward to an immediate response.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this epistle in reference t...
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Line 4, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...sed for issuing books from the library. Hence without it the literally suffering ever...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...h is effecting my exam preparation. Thus I would request you to issue a new card...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an immediate response. Yours sincerely Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99428571429 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07557062899 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1383979403 44.8134815571 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.25 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256953040796 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100475561724 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607278281278 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117148881627 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676638178147 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.