You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include:
➢ You need to be concise but explain what happened.
➢ No one responds to insults.
➢ What you wish from this. What do you want to happen?
➢ You want to be taken seriously.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in regard to an unpleasant incident that occur last night in your restaurant. I am a regular visitor of your food joint, but yesterday I was shocked by the customer service that I received from your end.
The Thai rice that was serve to me had a piece of stone in it, when I complained to the waiter initially he refused to agree to the chef’s mistake. Later after arguing and proving myself I did not receive any apology. To make the matter worst I was even charged for the uneaten rice platter.
It was indeed the worst experience that I have ever faced and there was no action taken for such poor maintenance of food. As you were not available for at the time of the incident, I would like you to make some strict protocols regarding maintenance of food as well as for your employees lack of negligence. I want your staff to not only apologise but also return my money that I have paid in your restaurant.
Would be waiting for your prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
Noah
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, well, as for, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49735449735 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49764593403 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640211640212 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8026149912 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197590607433 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670121538699 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053487002098 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09899888843 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878731271253 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.