The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

Submitted by miavu27 on Tue, 03/19/2019 - 01:02

The first chart compares the percentage of English people living alone in terms of age distribution by gender in the year 2011. The second chart gives information about how many bedrooms these one-households had in the same year.

it is clear that women aged 65 and over were more likely to live by themselves than men in england. At the same time, it is also noticeable that the majority of one-households lived in a 2-bedroom residence.

According to the bar chart, there were more men who lived alone than women in age groups under 65. Close to 65% men aged 35 to 49 lived by themselves that year, but this proportion shrank with age. From 65 onwards, it is shown that the figure for women who lived alone was increasing, at around 63% in the 65- to 74-year-old bracket and 76% in the 85-and-over group respectively.

Looking at the pie chart, we can see that for all age groups, 35.4% one-households in england lived in a 2-bedroom residence. there were similar percentages of people living alone in 1-bedroom and 3-bedroom house, at 28% and 29.8% respectively. Only 1.4% one-households lived in houses that had more than 5 bedrooms.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2019-12-11 Jack koh 61 view
2019-07-12 Tri H. Ho 61 view
2019-07-12 Tri H. Ho 61 view
2019-05-26 Lê Phạm Nhật Quỳnh 78 view
2019-05-26 Lê Phạm Nhật Quỳnh 78 view
>>> More users practiced this topic >>>
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...one-households had in the same year. it is clear that women aged 65 and over we...
^^
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...england lived in a 2-bedroom residence. there were similar percentages of people livi...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81313131313 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85933976567 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570707070707 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5254427757 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39082351747 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168220522281 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813782568829 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24281721976 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392646918207 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.