Parents should set strict rules to children.
As spread of education, many parents have interest in teaching methods. Some people think that parents should not treat their children too rigidly. However, in my opinion, strict rules are necessary to children because they could help children to have self-control and prevent them to fall into evil ways.
To begin with, children could notice how to maintain discipline in their life by rigid rules. Proper discipline is required to all of people who live in society. During children keep the rules that set by their parents, they could control themselves and develop self-discipline. For example, when my uncle Mark was 9 years old, he did not restrain his feelings and often came into conflict with other people. Accordingly, his parents set a stern rule that he had to act as he is kind. At first, he felt difficult about the rules, but a few months later, he was changed a lot. He learned the method to regulate himself through keeping the rule.
In addition, strict rules do not allow children to become evil. Children who do not have parents could not realize which behavior is evil or not, but children who have strict rules could easily separate bad behaviors. The reason is that they learn proper behavior during maintaining rigid rules. Subsequently, they do not have opportunity to become evil. For instance, my friend Kay was juvenile delinquents in the middle school. He did not have parents to block him, so he had many bad habitats such as smoking or drinking alcohol. However, after he was adopted by polite family, they started to stop his habitats by set a rule that he should run 3 kilometer if he try to do them. A few weeks later, he become a normal students.
To sum up, as I mentioned above, children should be established stern rules to raise ability to self-regulate and to prevent to become wicked people. In this regard, I think that parents should set strict rules for their children if they want them to succeed in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 651, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...tats by set a rule that he should run 3 kilometer if he try to do them. A few weeks later...
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Line 7, column 667, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...le that he should run 3 kilometer if he try to do them. A few weeks later, he becom...
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Line 7, column 721, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
.... A few weeks later, he become a normal students. To sum up, as I mentioned above, ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they want them to succeed in life.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82890855457 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53714754639 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52802359882 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2482116321 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.85 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399383729384 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123467510696 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128114559434 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305804002999 0.150856017488 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104944006167 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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