"By investing in tourism we can earn a lot of revenue and growth in national economy. At the same time it destroys the local culture. What is your opinion?" Give your opinion in no less than 250 words.
Tourism is one of the biggest industries worldwild. After investing at tourism sector for earning purpose, we can make a good profits and signficant enhancement in country´s economy. It consider many benefits , but there are drawbacks too. Local culture of particular nation is damaged by tourism activities. I perceive that it has more remedies than demerits.
Firstly, the most advantageous argument as per my understanding is that extension in employment because tourism spot is basically located at area, which do consider any industry as well as less population density. Due to there is less job opportunities so that rich people can invest their money at there such as build hotel or resort near to site, where more tourist are coming. For example, Mount Abu is one of the best sightseeing place, which is located on the mountain. It consider lots of guest houses and restorents because of citizens at there are employers and get various works for earning. Hence, making hotels at most preferable holiday destination can increase employment opportunities and this is the main reason behind growth in nation economy.
On the other hand, outsiders coming at too view our world heritage places. They are do not taking good care of these sites and doing some activities, which are responsible for damage our places given by ancestors. To illustrate, Taj Mahel is one of the wonder and symbol of love. Earlier palace is looking beautiful and colour of this is fully white. But , at recent time, it is looing dull white and some part of these palace is vanished. The tourist is only reason behind this result. Hence, goverment have to do limited tourism at these place and have to do regular maintance of these sites.
In conclusion, human kinds who is living at places, where no work for them as well as more people are coming at there for being relax, so it is more benefitial to establish hotels and gaming zones because it´s provide employment to jobless people, which is more important factor rather than damaging of heritage. We can maintain heritage place through regular maintainance but growth national economy is very cruial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0308988764 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69539757103 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587078651685 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6852226643 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2631578947 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161201152321 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475394005664 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449395133719 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107023122817 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500290344301 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.