Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically.
Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza.
There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza.
If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels.
I disagree with the author that prohibiting skateboarding will return the business in Central Plaza. The argument does't provide no evidence on skateboarding affecting the
business in Central Plaza. There is no direct link to this. The author doesn't focus on the other factors that may have affected the business.
Store Owners in Central Plaza believe that the decrease in their business is due to the increase in the number of skateboard users in the plaza. But it does't provide evidence on
how the skateboard users affect the decrease in number of shoppers. It may be due to less necessity of the products that may have lead to the decrease in business or decrease in the
popularity of the products of the stores. It has no direct link between skateboard users and decrease in number of shoppers. If the people need the products then sure they'll come to
buy it.
The author says that there has been increase in the amount of litter and vandalism in the plaza and recommends prohibiting skateboarding in the plaza. But there is no evidence that
this is being caused by the skateboard users. It may be caused by the shoppers also. It also does't prove that the prohibition will lead to decrease in litter and vandalism
in the Plaza. Author doesn't provide complete information on the skateboard users responsible for these action.
Thus, the argument is doesn't hold true. Even if skateboarding is prohibited it has no proof that the business in the Central Plaza will return to it's high levels. So the author is
false about the argument.
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. 33
- Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically.Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number 50
- As people rely more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to thinkfor themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- Our previous experience has been that our stores are most profitable in areas whereresidents are highly concerned with leading healthy lives. We should therefore build oneof our new stores in Plainsville, which clearly has many such residents. Plainsville 33
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 265.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88301886792 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6498413072 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 215.323595506 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403773584906 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6946390505 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1176470588 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368713315656 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123228200345 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152366432119 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165572371707 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142930072386 0.0667264976115 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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