Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Nowadays people are too occupied in their daily lives, that they don't even have moment to think what else that can achieve by implementing new thoughts in their lives. Some people often hesitate to change their live style, while other believes that adapting new things is always better. We will discuss both views in fourth coming paragraphs.
Its hustle in our lives which constraint people from making changes in their lives, as they have professed that this is best way to do a particular thing. However, they have become too comfortable in their life, that they assume small variation in their daily routine with cause problem. For instance, if a person travels daily by bus and get familiar with the route he will not easily accept other option like travelling by train, even if its economical and faster. Hence, its our notion that doesn't allow to improvise changes.
Some people always accept changes with open hands and often love to spend their lives with implementing new ideas. Therefore, these people can easily grasp new things and know how to tackle their daily problems better. Mostly, they can come up with wide range of solutions. To illustrate, that is the reason some people in multinational companies prefer to work aboard, so that they can opportunity to learn new things. Constant change is definitely going to enhances someones skills.
In my opinion, spending lives with same things is eclipsed, if we look at the advantages of accepting changes as benefit will directly upraise your knowledge and standard of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ccupied in their daily lives, that they dont even have moment to think what else tha...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...lives, as they have professed that this is best way to do a particular thing. However, ...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...en if its economical and faster. Hence, its our notion that doesnt allow to improvi...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... and faster. Hence, its our notion that doesnt allow to improvise changes. Some peo...
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Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improvising'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: improvising
...Hence, its our notion that doesnt allow to improvise changes. Some people always accept c...
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Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'enhance'.
Suggestion: enhance
... Constant change is definitely going to enhances someones skills. In my opinion, spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03501945525 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4118425239 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2829369487 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30845396686 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103582538056 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093880359365 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189704304511 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375131250315 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.