The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The chart indicates an analysis of producing and consuming of electricity about ten countries in the year 2014.
Roughly speaking, almost production and consumption of electricity were identical of each country . Especially, china was the highest number in chart among other countries. while republic of korea was the least of using and processing of electricity in 2014.
In 2014, china used the production of electricity at 5,398 billion kwh. Furthermore, it consumed almost 5,322 billion kwh. However, united states was second in production and consuming of electricity, which are 4099 in production and 3866 in consumption. Also, below second (united states) top of rank country, were dropped around 3000 billion kwh. For instance, Russia’s production was 1,057 in 2014 while consumption went down almost 2800 billion kwh.
Low numbers of country about using and processing electricity, Brazil was lower than germany about consumption, while production was higher than germany, at 4.1. Lastly, the least of the production and consumption of electricity was republic of korea, didn’t achieve 500 billion kwh, which were 485.1 in production, and 449.5 in consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, lastly, second, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64804469274 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99709221219 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530726256983 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 79.6168951919 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297370981023 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127048382313 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768399128809 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199068267872 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565345536301 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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