Young children are moving to live in the city more and moẻ. This problem has brought more benefits than setbacks. Agree or disagree
Immigration to cities of the young people becomes a great dilemma which becomes a big problem for the government which becomes a striking issue of every citizen. To my way of thinking, i disagree with this viewpoint that the public move to cities having more pros than cons.
It is undeniable that the young citizens migrate to urban having some several advantages. They can contain a better standard of living and find out a good job. Beside, companies and workplaces own abundant labor resources.
On the other hand, life always exists up and down so leaving hometown to live in other city which can bring many drawbacks. First and foremost , people move to cities in search job opportunities but reality may be a different story. Because many individuals who have the same options and then they also apply for offices. As a consequence, this situation leads to unemployment, unemployment leads to having not enough money to pay bills and accommodation, no money leads to homelessness and poverty.
Migrating to the urban from the countryside is the aim of many people. Meanwhile, who will be the farmers and taking over the fields or the rural areas just have wild meadow and a lack of growers? Therefore, conventional works, culture and customs tend to fall.
Life is not about following the trends. Life is about having the best choice so choosing the place where make people prospering and be pleased. Finally, in my opinion, this phenomenon bring to the society more negative than positive impact.
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- Young children are make a decision base on peer pressure. This problem brought more benefits than drawbacks. Agree or disagree 84
- Young children are moving to live in the city more and moẻ. This problem has brought more benefits than setbacks. Agree or disagree 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9604743083 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71255271209 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1579252109 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180655947083 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496132156714 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745879133899 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887644864145 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769815427769 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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