You have gained admission in a prestigious college. Now you have to arrange for the accommodation. Write a letter to the college stating your likes and dislikes in the choice of food and accommodation.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Romeo Winchester, I just gained admission into the department of biotechnology. I am writing to arrange for a single room occupancy.
I would very much like an accommodation in a student area, but definitely not in the college hostel. the house should have a single bed, a chair and a table. the house should be in a secure and serene environment that is not that far from the school; walkable distance. Furthermore, I would prefer a house that is on the top floor of a three-story building were there is enough ventilation.
I do not really like a house that is overpopulated with students, as this make it difficult to study through the amount of noise they generate. the house in question should not be located close to a business premises because of security reasons. I do not fancy a house in which the landlord also live; this is to avoid the scrutiny that comes from them, I am someone who likes freedom and privacy.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours faithfully,
Romeo Winchester
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...om occupancy. I would very much like an accommodation in a student area, but definitely not i...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...t definitely not in the college hostel. the house should have a single bed, a chair...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...have a single bed, a chair and a table. the house should be in a secure and serene ...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ough the amount of noise they generate. the house in question should not be located...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80555555556 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86905047312 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2761890262 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120850981545 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474257629779 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431876765856 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770526624449 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394814626531 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.