Money should be spent on creating new public buildings, such as museums and town halls, rather than renovating existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree
A significant number of individuals opine that valuable currency of the nation must be utilized in making new constructions like museums and town halls instead of repairing old ones. Renovation of these structures help the youth to understand the sacrifice of previous generations, therefore, I disagree with the above notion.
Knowledge from ancient buildings cannot be replaced by new ones. For illustration, use of tools and equipment’s in wars can be acknowledged by common man through visiting these ancient memorials, which in return help them to understand and gain the concept, how they had fought different wars and efficiently use those tools. For instance, weapons kept in the Maharaja Hall of Shimla India tells the story of wars between India Pakistan makes the younger generation aware of the instrument used in those fights. Moreover, the same art can be learnt and used in the current generation if required. For example, the beauty of Taj Mahal is highly praised by the world and provide the opportunity to understand how beautifully it was built. Hence, it is necessary to repair those structures within the time frame.
On the other hand, making new buildings is also important as it helps the nation to remain active and patriotic. For example, recently the war memorial constructed by India showed that the respect for the country army men, which motivates and encourage them to do duties and makes them believe that their sacrifice is not a waste. Although the new ones are vital according to the need but maintaining the old ones is crucial for the nation.
In conclusion, knowledge and sacrifice of our parent generations can only be learnt from old museums and town halls, thus it is essential to spend money on their renovation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08620689655 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83086647408 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7160658499 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.916666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123790795962 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476063969445 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483495892753 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897819511802 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467202439964 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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