You have a pen-friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major buildings in your country.Write a letter to your pen-friend. In your letter:•Greet your friend and say why you are writing.•Briefly describe a the building lastly decribe why so many people visit the building
Dear Saad,
hope you are doing well. I was amazed to learn from your letter that you are interested in learning about the major buildings in my country hence I wanted to write back immediately to provide information about one architecture marvels and a famous building in our country "The taj mahal". Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate taj mahal was built by Moghul emperor Shahjahan in memory of his beloved wife. it is located in the city Agra which is around 300 miles from Delhi. The historical monument was built in white marble and has four pillars with a dome structure building in the centre. On the walls, you can see a plethora of historical paintings depicting stories of love, hatred and war. Although this building is known around the globe for as the finest architecture marvel, on the other hand,<span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="marvel "></span> it is also known to a symbol of love by the emperor who endlessly loved his wife. From the center of palace you can see the panoramic view of the beautiful rose gardens covering the palace from all the sides which further beautify the place.
Lastly many people from domestic and international destinations come and visit Taj mahal because they are allured by its historical past and marvellous architecture.
I hope in the near future if you get a chance to come to India then you must go and visit taj mahal.
Warm wishes
said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...st go and visit taj mahal. Warm wishes said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, lastly, so, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97095435685 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31900411203 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626556016598 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1409782127 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140362159832 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417176928471 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671060066267 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903581043581 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941598580797 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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