Some people think it is a good idea of all employees to wear a uniform at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary era, dress code is essential part of employment and indicates the sign of employer's work. Thus, few individuals support that this is a excellent thought to wear same outfit as per work of the staff. I support to this to a large extent for some reasons. My view is explained in detail in the ensuing paragraph.
The first argument to justify is the unity between all working staff that means, there are no difference among humans who work at same place. So, they all could work with the help of each othersand they improve their skills. For instance, many IT worker working in a same IT company and there are rules for wear same uniform. Therefore, any employers have not be work alone in company and they can easily ask for problems and solve the errors. Hence, dress code showup the work of jobholders and people can easily understand the name of company especially un-educated people who could not read and write.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s, few individuals support that this is a excellent thought to wear same outfit a...
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Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ce, many IT worker working in a same IT company and there are rules for wear same unifo...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...form. Therefore, any employers have not be work alone in company and they can easi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68902439024 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44434632793 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.466769957 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179039224242 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691395422724 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378414165213 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130239478977 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289252722154 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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