A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. you have had a similar problem in the past.
write a reply to your friend . In your letter:
1. tell your friend you understand the problem.
2. explain what happened to you in the past.
3. suggest possible solutions to the problem
Dear Matt,
I hope that you must be enjoying your life, I wish to meet here in Toronto on Kapil's Wedding. i received you letter on two weeks ago but sorry for the delay in the response and just to let you know that i had had the same circumstance that you are going though. However, there was slightly difference with me due to my Job position.
I can imagine your situation during this hard time seeking support from you manager. Definitely, reporting to your Senior director after by passing your manager is not easy task while you are just associate Manager and especially, Manager do not support when you have got the escalation from client. you are on level 3 support so have the worse condition than me as you do not know management politics.
Therefore, i would advice you to take online classes for ITIL foundation and you must go for MBA course as this could helpful. Even, you should learn weak side of your Manager, make it positive for you.
I believe, you will find these ideas better to suit for you as i gone though the same path.
Anshul,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Matt, I hope that you must be enjoying your li...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...meet here in Toronto on Kapils Wedding. i received you letter on two weeks ago bu...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...meet here in Toronto on Kapils Wedding. i received you letter on two weeks ago bu...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... response and just to let you know that i had had the same circumstance that you ...
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Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ou have got the escalation from client. you are on level3 support so have the worse...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...know management politices. Therefore, i would advice you to take online classes...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...agement politices. Therefore, i would advice you to take online classes for ITIL fou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5625 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35828824309 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661458333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0525070896 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355240774549 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160485222675 0.0766984524023 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681037690805 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227383171041 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388707140245 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.