A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.
The university is one of important phases in all student live .the future of them could be so different with a university degree .this purpose that the proportion of male and female must be equally for accepting in these institute cannot be fair and it seems must consider the talent and interesting of persons instead of this plan .
Today's modern world is base of efficcency and ability .it not acceptable to decide only from sexual difference .In these recent years we witness about growing in amount of woman who attained to high level of education and work .for example the best leaders of europ are woman .beside that when the criteria be talent and try create motivation in contrast equally segment kill some talented student .for example in past few decade 70 % of persons which success in entrance exams of iran's universities were femails .
From the other aspect interesting take an sugnifficant role in making choice of men and women .some field are more popular between boys for example pilot . the 90 % of apply form belonged to male in last year . on the other hands , woman have better sens in mode and fashion or study about emotion same as psycology .future career have influence significantly on our satisfaction of life .all organization have experience about unmotivated workforce and impediments of them in their production .
In conclusion, it was shown that it not reasonable to give permit for continue study in university only base on sexual .some time one group have more willing about special fields and forced them to ignore it can not be profitable for person and society. only be man or woman not create right for students only hard work and knowledge seems fair for compare them and make priority to accept in enter university .
- Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars .To what extent do you agree ? 61
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What measures do you think might be effective? 56
- do you agree or disagree?all university student should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is 68
- A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. 84
- Homework is a part of school life Many people feel that giving homework daily to school children works well for them while some feel it is an unnecessary burden on them What do you think about it Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examp 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93265993266 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58110566517 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.278630279 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.285714286 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.4285714286 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1567407737 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725025549017 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679290570002 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100924535962 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067107281448 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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