The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Displayed in the flow chart is the production of bricks for the building industry.
Overall, It is clear that the process includes 7 stages, beginning with clay excavation and ending with the delivery of the bricks to customers.
Particularly, clay is dug and collected before pouring in the metal to get rid of oversized pieces. Afterwards, people add sand, water and mix them together, which put into a mould or wire cutter to shape, then, the products have been dried by an oven for 24 to 48 hours.
Continually, bricks are brought to two kilns and cooling chamber respectively. The first kiln 's temperature is moderate from 200 to 980 degree Celsius while 870 to 1300 degree Celsius is the temperature of the second kiln. After heating, bricks have been carried to the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours, which is followed by packaging. Finally, products wrapped transport in trucks to where they will be sold.
- The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. 78
- The graph shows the information about international conferences in three capital cities in 1980-2010. 78
- The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011. 73
- The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84713375796 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68549716177 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675159235669 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9263909074 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162186586845 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746064844056 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096953703071 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124645199961 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110086353667 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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