Charges for entrance to museums is seen by many as a tax on education. How far do you agree with the statement
There are many museums who has imposed a cost on visitors entry into the museums. Due to this, most of people sees this as a tax on education. I agree to this statement to a great extent.
To begin with, museums around the world are known for storage of heritage of any country. There are visitors from around the world who comes to see the glory of visiting country. The museums are charging the fees on their entry. This has result in drastic fall in the number of visits made to the museums. Students who goes to museums to learn about their country, about their forefather's glory. Students are not also exempted from charges on entering the museums. Consequently, students are facing troubles in their education. They sees this as a tax which has been levied on their education.
However, the museums need money for adding a new section or repairing the existing ones. But according to my thinking, museums requires to reduce their charges for the students who comes to take some information on rare artifacts. They can levy the charges on entrance of general public into the museums. They can even raise the charges for the affluent section on their entrance into museums. They can arrange the exhibition of newest section in museums to raise the money. They can even ask for donations to make their museums attractive that would result in more funds.
To wrap up it can be said that museums need to reconsider their plan of imposing charges on entry of people into museums.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
... many museums who has imposed a cost on visitors entry into the museums. Due to this, mo...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...rs entry into the museums. Due to this, most of people sees this as a tax on education. I agre...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'see'
Suggestion: see
...acing troubles in their education. They sees this as a tax which has been levied on ...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reducing
...ording to my thinking, museums requires to reduce their charges for the students who come...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...hey can levy the charges on entrance of general public into the museums. They can even raise t...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...section on their entrance into museums. They can arrange the exhibition of newest se...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the newest'.
Suggestion: of the newest
...useums. They can arrange the exhibition of newest section in museums to raise the money. ...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... section in museums to raise the money. They can even ask for donations to make thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74903474903 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38407531115 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482625482625 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9018975978 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.3333333333 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226399333587 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795145420447 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409945883211 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135085463754 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404358729327 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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