It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
Having an appropriate job is important enough which everyone thinks about it from childhood. Although, some parents assert for choosing a special job, but finally it is individual's duty to select and get a good jab.However, having a similar job to one's parent has its advantages such as using their valuable experiences and professional helps, but I do not think so. I feel this way because of 3 main point which I will explore them in the following essay.
Firstly, each person has its own passions, and character, and we can not seen two individuals with completely similar believes. For instance, my father is an expert surgeon and loves his work so much that he can work several days without break. In contrast, I dislike his job. Thinking about hospital, sick people, operation room is very boring for me. Even worth, I faint while seeing blood. It is a terrible and awesome job for me.
In addition, having a certain kind of ability in humankind is natural, So it is clear that all people do not have the same one. Consider, I am chemical engineer and enjoy from understanding chemical reactions and mechanism of their action; But I do not expect that my brother who is a uneducated person understands my pleasure field. As a result, it is not advisable that I force my children to select only my field of study. If we determine our kid's abilities, we will conduct them better in their future work life. Then, we would make a happier workers and efficient society.
Last but not least, as all flowers are beautiful and have their special shape, colors and smells, children also have various thoughts and creativity. we should respect their selections and passions. For instance, 5 years ago, when I wanted to choose my job, my parents support me a lot. however, my choice was not according to their desire. But I achieve many awards in my job and now they pride and count on me more than before.
In all, I am not agree with the statement that it is better for children to choose a job that is similar to their father's or mather's one. Not only, should younger have a career according to their passions, abilities, and creativity, but they also should stand on their feet and do their best for making a better world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: beliefs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67005076142 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59142400398 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565989847716 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6713819997 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.619047619 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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