Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Offering children liberty to pursue what they want to, has always been debatable topic. A section of society deems that they should be free to make their personal decision on their daily life, for example, to buy things, go out, eating food and many more. Whereas, others believe that they should be making choices of significant aspects of their life. I partially stand by above notion that a child should neither be given complete freedom nor restricted on everything. This essay outlines both side of such argument.
On the one hand, children are, ostensibly, most innocent among all. At this age, they learn everything from their surrounding environment and daily habits, to illustrate this, parents always teach their child not only how to behave well but also how to and why they should do every small things in their life, such as brushing their teeth and taking bath regularly. It is deliberated by many that these small habitats will go along with them in future, also it affects their personality and attitude. Moreover, making things on their own will only make them self-oriented person rather than being a part of a team or community. Henceforth, it is not advisable to allow young ones to go-on their self.
On the other hand, a little child is not mature to make critical decisions without consulting any adult, because they usually pursue for many thing in haste, which could hindrance their circumstances. For instance, while choosing their career option, they are more likely to make mistake due to the lack of knowledge. Furthermore, if they are restricted on tiny matters, they are prone to lack self-confidence, which is one of the significant factor in this ultra modern world.
To recapitulate, both of this developments have their pros and cons, however, they guardians or family should look after them in every feasible manner to prevent consequences. Similarly, they should be guided in proper way, at the same to time, they should be capable of making a few decision themself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ngs, go out, eating food and many more. Whereas, others believe that they should be mak...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... small habitats will go along with them in future, also it affects their personality and ...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
... adult, because they usually pursue for many thing in haste, which could hindrance their c...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...dern world. To recapitulate, both of this developments have their pros and cons, ...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decision seems to be countable; consider using: 'few decisions'.
Suggestion: few decisions
...ime, they should be capable of making a few decision themself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00895522388 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64448635588 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605970149254 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3200353669 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188140170101 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695010318176 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058040663393 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113042709553 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583619203502 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.