You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
• explain the reason why you decline the offer
• express your gratitude
• explain why you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I have been offered a job of Sr.Planning Engineer in your organization and I am very grateful for that. But I regret that I cannot accept this offer right now.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I have known your company for decades and understand that your company has very good reputation in market for delivering quality projects on time. I really appreciate that you have considered me a deserving candidate and have express confidence in me for this position in your organization. Honestly it took one week to weigh in my opinion.
At the end of day, I decided to decline this job offer because I am happy with my job roles and responsibilities given by current company which I believe are bit challenging and glad that I have made good achievements in this organization which is giving me an edge to my career growth. The current company has provided me a solid working platform to explore my skills and knowledge.
I am thankful to you for the opportunity you have offered me.However, considering my job satisfaction with my current employer and career growth opportunities, I find no other way but to decline your offer.
Thanks for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully
Rakesh Soni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Planning
...ou that I have been offered a job of Sr.Planning Engineer in your organization and I am ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...for the opportunity you have offered me.However, considering my job satisfaction with m...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, really, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87155963303 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99051610938 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.7929602091 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5454545455 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275716232013 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102174384093 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697749883054 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16296692768 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754170437568 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.