In some countries, the average weight of children is increasing and their level of health and fitness decreasing. What are the cause of these problems. What measures could be taken to solve it.
In the present scenario, it is being seen that health level of people is declining at an alarming rate. It can be seen that in many nations, physical well-being of juveniles is deteriorating and they are becoming obese. This essay will discuss the factors, which are responsible for health declining and obesity, and also suggest some effective remedies to combat with this challenges.
One predominant reason why children become fatty and preying to many ailments, is sedentary life style. In other words, juveniles do not do any physical hardwork and adopt deterimental eating behavior, due to this, they become obese and unhealthy. For instance, children watch television and surfing on internet whole day, and eat fast food, which are full with carbohydrates and oil, that is why they prey to obesity and suffer from many harmful diseases. Recently a survey is condected by " world health organization" gives a statistical data that around 50,000 children suffer from fatal diseases every year, these diseases are produced by junk food. In order to tackle this issue, there is a need to nip the problem from the bud. Firstly, parents should keep an eye on their offsprings and supervise them for eating methods and doing exercises. More specifically, teachers should also guide students about healthy diet and physical work out. By doing this children can change their eating pattern and may become fit and healthy.
In conclusion, although, unhealthy life style and obesity in children is a deep rooted problem, which is rising due to lethargic life pattern and bad eating habits, which can be fixed by working shoulder to shoulder on the part of parents as well as teachers. Both these guide the juveniles about eating pattern and encourage for taking part in sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1301369863 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66568619775 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4136034157 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103968899143 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388665326036 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318264637135 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728686213027 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250137211259 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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