Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the power of advertising on people’s life is undeniable. It is said that what is most popular to buy is not real needs for people. Personally, I agree with this opinion because of following arguments:
Firstly, it is obvious that the purpose of advertising is to sell a special product more and more regardless to what is people’s needing or even regardless to quality of the product. To achieving this purpose, the advertising industry try to recognize people’s behavior and try to know what can make people more obliged. As we know people are always seeking more happiness and a better life so advertising try to use this fact as a hidden message in selling goods. For example, they use young and cute girls and handsome boys to advertise a toothpaste that they use it while they are happy and fulfilled. They want to show that if people use this toothpaste they would be cute and happy as young actors.
Secondly, advertising try to develop consumerism in society then they can sell more and more. They try to show new models of goods every day and make people more greed to buy the newest model. For example, in my country it is not pleasure for a family to use electronic device like television for more than few years because they think it would be out of fashion and it is necessary to buy a new one. So advertising encourage them to buy a new television by show the new models of television every day.
In conclusion, I believe that advertising develop consumerism and take people away from their essential needs. However, people must have too many option and enough information to buy goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'many options'.
Suggestion: many options
...al needs. However, people must have too many option and enough information to buy goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75704225352 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76159392592 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496478873239 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.247551823 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140534986146 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616727277943 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437372802825 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942734416251 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579815274955 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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