Most people try to balance between their work and other parts of their lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the reasons for this and what can be done to solve this?
One of the most conspicuous trend today is that people find it very difficult in putting career and daily life into equilibrium. Many factors can be the causes of this and some solutions can be considered to tackle this problem.
To begin with, the ambition of having a brilliant career could be the main reason to this imbalance. Many set very high goals in their career and they assume that a successful job could bring about respectability also wealthy. The more ambitious they are, the much more time they devote on working, which can left not enough leisure time they have for themselves and other relationships. Not only people hoping for the bright future put so many efforts in working but those who struggle every day to afford the living. Because of high cost of living, a lot of persons have to work intensively in a long time, even have two or three jobs just to pay the bills. A heavy workload could occupy all of their time and would not allow them to have free time to care about their health or have any other concerns.
In fact, it could be several solutions to deal with this trouble. Creating the society involving less judgmental on others based on what they can achieve in their working life will reduce the pressure to gain the good reputation only from their jobs. Moreover, learning how to manage time effectively could be the answer to those who have to work overtime regularly.
To conclude, losing the imbalance between working and personal life are one of the most common problems people have to face in the modern life. However, there could be some appropriate answers to this if we try to figure it out.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e who have to work overtime regularly. To conclude, losing the imbalance betwee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6724137931 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39109773844 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8435640578 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304925578239 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105883406261 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069044604241 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197026576681 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366150863433 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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