A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
• Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
• Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Jack:
I know it’s been a while since my last letter to you, but I have been hectic searching for a suitable job offer for you as you asked. I was searching in my local newspaper for job vacancies, when I spotted this company looking for translators to hire. They position requires you to translate documents and contracts related to the company’s deals. Additionally, translate during board meetings.
I deem that this ought to be the perfect job you have been looking for. As you meet all the job qualifications from being fluent in English, accordingly with French and Spanish. Another aspect to take into considerations is that, the company is allocated near by my current office. So that, I think it is going to be a great opportunity to meet daily.
If you are interested in applying for this offer, you can send me your CV with the required papers and I can pass by the company’s office and apply them for you. Otherwise, you can contact them through the company’s e-mail address: Sharkgroup@yahoo.com .
I am looking forward to hearing from you regarding this subject. And for any further information feel free to contact me anytime.
Your lovingly,
Mike Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...tions is that, the company is allocated near by my current office. So that, I think it ...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s;s e-mail address: Sharkgroup@yahoo.com . I am looking forward to hearing from y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, regarding, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09843210219 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3007407965 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6923076923 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409196200227 0.216113520407 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132259943718 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104387876186 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226456281041 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742787612617 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.