Nowadays mobile phones and the internet became a very common aspect of socializing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the fact that mobile phones and the internet have become a very common aspect of socializing. While there are arguments favoring both the sides, I profoundly believe that its disadvantages outrage its disadvantages. I will be analyzing both the sides throughout this essay.
The usage of phones and internet has made us feel that distance are a mere less factor for consideration. The persons from both sides of the world can be connected within seconds due to this technology. This makes us to feel close to all whom we care for even-if they are miles apart. The internet helps us to make new bunch of friends from any part of the world and even those whom we have not even seen in our lifetime.
While there are numerous positive aspects, there are a plethora of reasons that accounts for its soaring concern. The most preponderant one is that this gives a false picture to the young generation that relations are something which needs just to be maintained in the internet. They take mere effort to go out, meet and socialize with people than talking with them online. They become unaware about the social aspects of the real world and are confined themselves into the virtual world of internet and phones. The recent survey conducted by The Deccan Chronicle among the university students proved that students who spend more of their time in social networking are less interested in going out and meeting up with people.
To conclude with, while there are several factors that accounts in favor of socializing using phones and the internet I profoundly believe that the negative impact that this causes outweighs its positives. ss
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ss
...at this causes outweighs its positives. ss
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90753424658 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58572983513 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6868683631 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 7.25397266985 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176281884761 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606325269988 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550260285992 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117787926885 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633939281394 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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