It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Having a fair amount of education gives value to your life. It is often said that education is a
powerful tool that can change the world. Keeping this in mind, I strongly agree to the fact
that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice.
Over the last years, we have seen an increase in couples getting married at a very young age
which has been substantiated by the survey conducted by The Globe magazine over the age
group of 20-28. Many a times, what happens is that they make an accord, which at a later
point of time, makes them feel that they were too early.
One of the major dilemma that they face is the financial instability. The wage that they can
put up for the family is proportional to the level of education they possess. This, at a later
point of time create much havoc when the size of the family gradually increases.
To summarize, in my opinion everyone should first go for a proper education followed by a
decent job through which they can live a happy and financially stable life with their life
partner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 1207.87684729 74% => OK
No of words: 195.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58461538462 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38350677291 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 379.143842365 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5301074174 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.12807881773 291% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162061184993 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688589223292 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155609127257 0.071462118173 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698856591547 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174402039809 0.0609392437508 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 55.0591133005 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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