Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over recent years, the increasing competitions in the private and government sector have inclined the organization to create a mindset that the appearance of the employee matters the most. However, others still give more weight to values than to the overlook of the team. In this essay, I will discuss the bilateral sides of the arguments and will also present my point of perception over it.
In the private sector, it is generally observed that companies spend a lot in the way they appear to the public in the market, as the basic formula of marketing is that better looks attract more customers. Moreover, in the case when individual represent the organization at the global platform, the dress code and the etiquettes are the for mostly used to analyze the overall standard of the company. Additionally being properly dressed, boosts up the morale of the workforce to produce better output and work more efficiently. Even a study conducted in McKinsey reveals that working in formal codes helps the company generate more revenue as the employee is more dedicated and tries to follow a perfect schedule which eventually creates prominent understanding between them.
On the other hand, great technical giants such as Google and Microsoft do not allocate a little consideration to the outfit, rather they stick to the internal values of the core team working up day and night. The main reason behind this approach is that if the companies try to bind the atmosphere this directly affects the creator's way of working. For instance, Apple CEO Steve Jobs has always been seen in informal jeans and t-shirt during the launch event of new products and undoubtedly this style has never hampered the quality or the sales of the community.
To sum up, no one can contradict, that it is the appearance that gives the first idea about anything whether personal or organizational. But in my opinion, principles and standards are far more important, as people always want the desired product rather than having only good looks.
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Suggestion: Additionally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0237388724 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68742161576 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626112759644 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7689355591 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.083333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944956037094 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325122943848 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209225358847 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525531031273 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168141749081 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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