rite about the following topic.
People are never satisfied and always want more.
In what ways is this a good thing and in what ways is this a bad thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
People's desire has been depicted to be virtually endless. This essay aims to shed light on the positive and negative that this might lead to.
On the one hand, the aspiration to achieve more can yield positive changes. First and foremost, it motivates suppliers to improve the quality of their products and services, which is crucial for societies to develop. This could be seen in all spheres of life, from technological firms introducing smarter devices to educational institutions devising more effective teaching methods. Furthermore, as members of society work hard to meet their increasing needs, they create a better life for themselves and possibly, contribute more to their communities. Examples to justify this include successful entrepreneurs like Puff Diddy, who fight their way out of poverty and donate money to charitable projects in order to help those in struggling areas.
On the other hand, it is undeniable the insatiable greed could also have an adverse affect on multiple scales. On a personal level, the absence of self-fulfilment may put people under tremendous pressure, which is detrimental to their mental and physical well-being. For instance, research has shown that working tirelessly under constant stress increases risks of depression and cardiovascular diseases among adults. On a wider scale, the never-ending desire for more goods has also birthed conspicuous consumption. As consumers discard objects that are perfectly useable to buy newer products, as illustrated by the case of smart devices, the resulting throwaway society is bound to pollute the environment even more.
In conclusion, I believe that while wanting more could fuel social development in the form of high quality products and better living standards, it could also damage people's health and the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to pollute the environment even more. In conclusion, I believe that while want...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49466192171 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9560210692 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669039145907 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3568849927 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139497919282 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439599862911 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331269621045 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077565740183 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025162235585 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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