School uniforms, which are modes if identification in schools should be banned.to what extent do you agree or disagree.
School uniforms, which are modes if identification in schools should be banned. I strongly disagree to this motion as it will make way for miscreants to gain access into schools and cause havoc, and they may not be identified, since every one is looking casual in their usual home outfits.
Identity of every child in school is paramount, it is a way of accounting for the registered members of the school. This is achieved by making the school children to wear a particular uniform that is peculiar to their schools. If this is abolished, and scholars are made to appear in school on mufty, it will be very difficult to ascertain who the pupils or students of a particular school. Consequently, an avenue for an uncensored entrance into the school by unregistered children. This will be detrimental, because good account of students will not be given as a result of mis identity.
Furthermore, child theft could also be a consequence of allowing the children to come to school in their casual wear. This is because even, though a child's face can not be seen from a distance, the school uniform can be used to identify him or her due to the uniqueness of the fabric. Therefore, when an illegal extraction or abduction of a school child is taking place, the pupil is quickly recognized, and some quick investigations will be made to identify the abductors. For example, a child from Rumuepirikom primary school, would have been a victim of child kidnappers but was urgently rescued, courtesy of the uniform he was wearing, and the culprit was caught and immediately handed over to the police.
Conclusively, the importance of youngsters appearing in their school regalia can not be over emphasized. Hence it should be made compulsory for every school child to report to school in their uniforms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8954248366 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88769827297 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9077021886 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306128810179 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153285737381 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158584606426 0.0667982634062 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229747568077 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744982121387 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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