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Question- people are living in a throwaway society, using things for a short time and throwing them away.
What is the causes of this?
What problems does it lead to?
It is apparent these days that individuals live in disposing community,in such a way that, they use certain things for a limited time and thrash them away. This essay will discuss the reasons of this disturbing trend and examine the consequences it has led to.
The principal reason is the excess production of materials in manufacturing industries. This is because they produce plethora of final products to the market. For instance,in Nigeria, it has been observed recently that polymers are the major cause of blockage in the gutters. As a consequence, it has led to stagnant water in the flow of drainage system. It is thus clear that limited resources of products is essential to the society. Another reason is the fact that companies are not recycling their existing products. There are no industries, which can recycle end products.
Despite this, there are puzzling circumstances it has brought to the country. Firstly, it has led to dirty environment, which can lead to various diseases to humans health. People expunge dirt anywhere they like after use. Taking Lagos state, for example, the residents dump dirt on the streets because waste companies are inefficient. As a result,there has been cholera outbreak in the state. Secondly, death of inhabitants is on the increase due to fad. Individuals throw old fashioned items to purchase modern technology. Because of this, radiation occur in the environment.
In conclusion, it is evident that there are several causes of disposals and a variety of negative effects.we must ensure steps are taken to prevent these problems from deteriorating further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24230769231 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93453977118 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3000612182 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7222222222 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176009184557 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396636011152 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434983810329 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959806016748 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552920017115 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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